Please comment, spell check, grammar check, re-word, re-write, etc....

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Sweet deal that he's coming!

That needs help.



Joe Buissink has captured the weddings of many Hollywood couples, including Jessica Simpson and Nick Lachey, Christina Aguilera, Jennifer Lopez, Hillary Swank and Chad Lowe, and has even been hired by Annie Leibovitz to cover her sister‟s wedding.

Mr. Buissink will be in Dulles, Virginia on Wednesday, April 18, 2007 to present a one-day seminar on “The Psychology of Wedding Photography.


But I'm not a english major by any strecth of the imigination.

The second paragraph might need to be broken up. I'm not the grammar police...cause I don't know the rules. It seems too long though.

Other than that...the only rules about Press Releases I know are.

Does it look right? (correct format)
Headline forces you to read the next section?
Section One forces you to read the next section?
End with some excitement, an intreging question or a reason to call.

Good Luck!