Let me know what you think about this ad. I took this photo this weekend of my business partner Jeremy Lucero at a wedding we were shooting together.
Shaun Austin

one of me. now i know why i am a photographer not the one being photographed

Great composition! It works well for including print in the image! You might try to add a little contrast, effects, etc. to the image to make it pop a little more?

Nathan

did you just add contrast

It does look a lot better like this. Thanks for the input.

I LOVE IT!

I agree with Nathan, the original looks a little common.


Rob

I like the shot and the layout. However I think the text is a little too difficult to read. Maybe try playing with the text or adding a background to the text so that it's clear and contrasts nicely with the rest of the image. It's looking good!

I agree the text seems a little hard to read. Your logo seems to get lost in the grass too. Otherwise looks good.

It looks like Nathan ran the Lomo 1 effect from Nitorix. Which in the process will add contrast. If you don't have the effect, one thing you can do is to make a duplicate layer of your original (without adding any contrast) and make that layer an overlay layer or softlight layer. That will boost your contrast for you in a kinda cool way.