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Jessica Parkison
I need opinions! A friend of mine made these logos for me and I would like to see if there is anything that should be changed, color or design wise. I want to keep everything simple, fresh, and fun.

Thanks for your opinions!

There are 3 btw
JacquelynnBrynn
I like em all- love the last one
the real tami
i'd go with the last one, simply becuase its landscape, which is easier to use, like on letterhead, websites, etc.
{ashley}
I like the size and style of the flower in the first one, but I like the layout of the thrid one the best. I really like the bird! Is there a way to combine the two designs? Just my .02 wink.gif
zubyds
I like them all but absolutely LOVE the last one!
Lori Anderson
I like the last design. But I think the flower should be a lighter shade of green. The name gets a little lost.
leahstafford
I like the last design however whenever I see that bird I think of Boutwell but it's still my favorite.
ShannonD
I also love the last one!
jfk
I think the last one is the winner :-)
Laurie
If you go with the last one...I don't like the way the e and s come together in the "jes", and I don't like the way the a and r come together in "park". If you can clean those intersections up a little...perfect.

Laurie
frankdigiorgio
I also like the last one but would like to see a little more white space on the right side. Right now the word photography looks cramped...
Lucky Red Hen
My vote is for #3...
QUOTE (Laurie @ October 8 2008, 01:16 PM) *
I don't like the way the e and s come together in the "jes", and I don't like the way the a and r come together in "park".
+1

I like the idea of lightening the flower color but I'd also suggest moving it up to the left so that the middle dot of the flower is the dot of the j (giving the flower some meaning or presence to be there) and shrinking "photography" so it's not so HUGE, which will automatically add some more white canvas to the right side.

Do show us the final logo when you're done!
Neil Creative
I like the last one the best. The first two are a little too busy for me — too much color contrast between the flower and the background.

I agree on all the above with the way the letters are forming and also about photography being smaller.
Amber Martin
I also love the feel of the last one, but I love the font in the first. So maybe keep the "flow" of the last one but change the font? Can't wait to see what you end up with.
Izzie
#3 is my fav!
Laura Stetser
they are all cool - very nice designs! the last one would be easier to use in most places but I will say...it seems to me I've seen the bird in a lot of other logos (?). But if you totally couldn't decide, you could also use two of these in conjunction - one for letterhead, website, etc. and the other like your signature logo for watermarking, blogging, etc. That's what I do.
Love the colors! Super fresh!
mjlove
Go with the last one.

M.J.
Ginger
I, too, prefer the last, but they all have a feeling of not being quite finished. They lack a polish. I think they are good concepts, but they need some depth to look complete. Best of luck, just went thru this myself....new logos can be a LOT of work! smile.gif

Abra Morris
I think the following two opinions hit the nail on the head as far as the last one goes. I personally LOVE #1 and #3. Maybe you could use both...the landscape one would be awesome for headers and letterheads and the square one for your watermark on pics. Just an idea. Great job though.

QUOTE (Laurie @ October 8 2008, 04:16 PM) *
If you go with the last one...I don't like the way the e and s come together in the "jes", and I don't like the way the a and r come together in "park". If you can clean those intersections up a little...perfect.

Laurie


I like the idea of lightening the flower color but I'd also suggest moving it up to the left so that the middle dot of the flower is the dot of the j (giving the flower some meaning or presence to be there) and shrinking "photography" so it's not so HUGE, which will automatically add some more white canvas to the right side.
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