some new pics ...
critque welcome

Hello Kathrin,

Since you asked for CC,I find all three images to be a bit flat and lacking in contrast. A bit underexposed perhaps, especially in the first. I played around very quickly in photoshop on that one, and to my tastes found a 30 second bit of photoshop made the first shot really pop.

A bit higher on the flash output, and I think you'd have it nailed, and then a touch of contrast in post.

BTW, there is a private members only picture subsection on OSP that you might want to use for future posts of models like Svetlana. Some people around here get their knickers in a knot when they stumble upon photos like these. )

Thanks for sharing. Hopefully you'll get some more feedback as well.
Chris.

after Chris advice ...

what do you think now?

i like them! i think they are pretty cool!

cool! I like!--
and I love her name even more.

I wish I had a cool name like that.

Kathrin,

These are definitely better with the contrast bump. Just to show you what I did, I'm including a copy of the image that I PS'd up a bit.