I'll be starting my second album soon so I thought I'd ask for some CC on this one.
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Thank you,
Scott
Full Version: My First Album
I've just finished my first album design. I've sent a link to the bride, haven't heard back yet.
I'll be starting my second album soon so I thought I'd ask for some CC on this one.
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Thank you,
Scott
I'll be starting my second album soon so I thought I'd ask for some CC on this one.
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Thank you,
Scott
I really like it. I think it tells a nice story, its nicely laid out.
Good job!
Ksenia
Good job!
Ksenia
I think its really great. A few suggestions:
4-5 I like the pictures, but the lines through are distracting. I like that you are trying to add in a design element, but it takes away from your work.
6-7 the red bar is almost going through the center of the picture. I think you should either have it go through the center or move it over to the left more to show that it was intentional to not be symmetrical
8-9 Love the different shots of the bride. I would actually lighten up under her eyes a bit in the color shots.
Overall love it, and take or leave my suggestions. A person once told me on osp that as long as the couple likes it, thats all that matters. Everyone is going to have different opinions of what they like
4-5 I like the pictures, but the lines through are distracting. I like that you are trying to add in a design element, but it takes away from your work.
6-7 the red bar is almost going through the center of the picture. I think you should either have it go through the center or move it over to the left more to show that it was intentional to not be symmetrical
8-9 Love the different shots of the bride. I would actually lighten up under her eyes a bit in the color shots.
Overall love it, and take or leave my suggestions. A person once told me on osp that as long as the couple likes it, thats all that matters. Everyone is going to have different opinions of what they like
QUOTE (Erica Ferrone @ September 10 2008, 08:02 AM) 
4-5 I like the pictures, but the lines through are distracting. I like that you are trying to add in a design element, but it takes away from your work.
+1. Overall I think you did well and the couple will love it. But I think the lines over their faces takes away from the main image.
QUOTE (Erica Ferrone @ September 10 2008, 08:02 AM)
I think its really great. A few suggestions:
4-5 I like the pictures, but the lines through are distracting. I like that you are trying to add in a design element, but it takes away from your work.
6-7 the red bar is almost going through the center of the picture. I think you should either have it go through the center or move it over to the left more to show that it was intentional to not be symmetrical
8-9 Love the different shots of the bride. I would actually lighten up under her eyes a bit in the color shots.
Overall love it, and take or leave my suggestions. A person once told me on osp that as long as the couple likes it, thats all that matters. Everyone is going to have different opinions of what they like
4-5 I like the pictures, but the lines through are distracting. I like that you are trying to add in a design element, but it takes away from your work.
6-7 the red bar is almost going through the center of the picture. I think you should either have it go through the center or move it over to the left more to show that it was intentional to not be symmetrical
8-9 Love the different shots of the bride. I would actually lighten up under her eyes a bit in the color shots.
Overall love it, and take or leave my suggestions. A person once told me on osp that as long as the couple likes it, thats all that matters. Everyone is going to have different opinions of what they like
We are SO on the same page!
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