QUOTE(Radiant09 @ July 24 2008, 01:08 PM)

You shouldn't feel naked at all. You did a sweet job. I have a few comments but don't take them meaning I don't think you did well because you obviously did.
So here are my thoughts for each shot.
#1: It looks like the focus point could have come a bit stronger on the eyes. I would also clone out the single strand of hair thats running down her face. Besides those two things, this is a really fantastic shot. The exposure is spot on. You got a killer expression from her. Getting someone to speak to the camera when doing a serious face can be tough.
#2: Like Jamie said this one is a soft. I looks a tiny bit underexposed, I think if you brightened this photo up a little bit and gave it a little bit of USM you can get some more out of it. I would soften up the shadows under her eyes. I dig the pose and the close crop.
#3: Good shot. Not your best or your worst of the set.
#4: This one rocks. LOOVE the perspective and the low DOF. Seems like those scary places can make the best places to shoot. *To me at least

*. The post work on this image is top notch. If I had to find something to nit pick about this image I would say I wish you were standing about 6 inches further back so you didn't clip her hands but that is hardly worth mentioning.
#5: My favorite of the set. You basically did everything about as well as it could be done. Rock on.
Hope some of this helps.
thank you! i really appreciate the feedback. i definetely agree with #2. camera setting boo boo on my part.

i will for sure go back and take your advice.
#4 thanksthanksthanks. and they do seem to be the best. and unfortunately, in our downtown, the smelliest as well.

i mean, not that urine doesn't add to the ambiance...
#5 my fav as well! as i improve, i'm finding that it is THE MOST exciting thing in the world when exactly what you want comes off that camera.
this was way more painless than i thought. haha. i'll post more often now.

oh, and i'll fix the hair in 1.