This was just a week after my first wedding, so don't know how much I really improved but would still REALLY like some tips on improving and what I did wrong/right. Thanks!

Full Set: http://flickr.com/photos/creativelychallen...57605958000162/

Heather,

I think overall you did a really great job. I think your focus and exposure look good. My only comments (since you asked) are the following:

In your color images there is a little inconsistently on color some seem a little warm some seem a little cool. To me this has been one of the hardest things to work on, myself.
Most of your images are framed up really tight. Which works for some images, but I would like to see more variety in your composition.

Really thou, you are doing great so far!!

Thanks. I notice a difference too, but the major difference was dealing with two cameras, one with flash, one using natural light. That added some interesting elements. So hopefully I can fix that by buying my new camera! haha
Do you have any tips for staying consistent?

These are beautiful! My first thought regarding your second image is that I would like to see a little more of her shoulders in the frame to "ground" her face a little. She looks a little floaty, if that makes any sense! The picture is perfectly focused and sharp though!

Can't wait to see more of your work!

I have one of those somewhere! HAHA I just it was too much in the frame, but I could fish that up probably.