David,
The first thing I think of is that it is messy and hard to read. I also don't care for the color, it just gives me the wrong feel for what you do. I also don't think it works as a logo be the traditional standards mentioned a bunch of times on this forum. That is just my $.02 though.

I hope that helps a little.
Grace and Peace,
Crystal
QUOTE(David from Puerto Rico @ June 16 2008, 02:38 PM)

I have a graphic designer working on a new logo. She submitted this first concept and I really would like your sincere opinion, what you like and what don't you and why.
Truly appreciated.
