Jamie Delaine
May 27 2008, 04:38 PM
Let me know what you think about the design, located
HERE. I've attached a few spreads to keep the thread more than just text!
typhotos
May 27 2008, 04:39 PM
Very clean and simple. I think it looks good, of course the shots are great as well!
~Govinda Jaya~
May 27 2008, 04:41 PM
nice, clean, simple, beautiful....love it. if this is your 1st kiss album...you are in for a treat!
just one tiny thing...on the last page there is a red fire alarm right above his head...maybe clone it out.
Claredy
May 27 2008, 04:51 PM
i think its lovely

my only suggestion is a few shots look like they are slightly tilted...but not intentionally, like the shoe shot (which is awesome) would probably look better if made so the windowstill was horizontal, not tilted. Same with the one of the bride by the red barn door
Rachael Earl
May 27 2008, 05:29 PM
Love it! I also have to comment that I love your new logo and avatar!
Jamie Delaine
May 27 2008, 08:48 PM
Thanks Rachael; Yeah I've done a little re-structuring in my business--Change is good, sometimes.
Paige Elizabeth
May 28 2008, 09:01 AM
Gorgeous, gorgeous. I love the shot of her mom putting her dress on.
(Have you though about adding a full spread of the bride and groom to finish the story?)
Jamie Delaine
May 28 2008, 10:36 AM
Thanks Paige: it's actually the maid of honor, her younger sister. It's kind of hard to tell with the action applied.

No, I haven't thought about that! I think I might. This is my first wedding designs so I'm lovin' all the comments you are all giving.
1) Straighten all the "kind of tilted" images
2) Clone out fire alarm
3) Add last full-page spread.
Kadie Pangburn
May 28 2008, 11:20 AM
Ok so this is totally off topic and I hope it doesn't come across as rude, but every time I see your photo Jamie, all I think is... wow! how old is that girl, she looks like she's 15!
So out of curiosity, how old are you!?
Your work is always stunning, and the album is gorgeous. My only crit would be maybe having one more spread of reception photos? Anyway, that's my .02 cents...
oh and I'm super sad you can't some out to Arizona for my sis's wedding!
Jamie Delaine
May 28 2008, 03:54 PM
Haha, Yeah, I look a little young, right?

I'm 17. I'll be 18 in August.
Kadie Pangburn
May 28 2008, 06:10 PM
QUOTE(Jamie Delaine @ May 28 2008, 04:54 PM)

Haha, Yeah, I look a little young, right?

I'm 17. I'll be 18 in August.
Awesome, you are very talented and you are going to have a great career ahead of you if this is where you are when your 17! I was 18 when I started my photo business, but was no where near as talented as you are!
Paige Elizabeth
May 29 2008, 05:03 PM
omg. i looove you guys. and i am sooooooo old....
Jamie Delaine
May 29 2008, 05:05 PM
Haha! Paige i loooooooove you and you are sooooo not old.
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