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jdear
Hey guys - Just sent off a new design for a sample album with a new album company. We are excited to see how it comes back - the company can put in metallic pages, canvas pages (canvas rag) and mix up matt + digital pages!

anyhoo - my clever wife has come up with the design (I just took the photos)









































Love some feedback... we really haven't designed many albums at all!

Jonathan
jfphoto
Very nice! Nice clean design, not bad for one of your firsts! One thing I would suggest is your closeup spread with the bride and bridesmaids to move the image over a bit to the right so the bride's face is not in the crease or center line. Same with the last spread, move that to the left. I don't know who you are using to print the book, but even folded pages with no gutter don't look so great when going down someone's face, especially the bride's. You don't want to get the famous pink line in her face either. Good job though, tell your wife she did good! Nice images also!

Parris
QUOTE(jfphoto @ May 17 2008, 09:02 PM) *
One thing I would suggest is your closeup spread with the bride and bridesmaids to move the image over a bit to the right so the bride's face is not in the crease or center line. Same with the last spread, move that to the left. I don't know who you are using to print the book, but even folded pages with no gutter don't look so great when going down someone's face, especially the bride's. You don't want to get the famous pink line in her face either.


You took the words right outta my mouth! smile.gif Other than that, the book looks neat!
Lindsey
There's already a good catch on the gutter---


I LOVE the design! Very simple and clean while still utilizing all your space.
jdear
Thanks guys - yes we had fixed the images so the seam wasn't going through the brides face, but somehow I posted a slightly older version! Cheers!
Claredy
its really good smile.gif I got half way though and went...thats Sydney!! Its funny when you see it pop up every now and then on a mainly US site biggrin.gif
mattcam
Who cares about the album... your images are GREAT! Really, really nice.

Oh... and I like the album too! smile.gif
dewdrop
Nice work and beautiful layout.

Check the first to last spread. The top 4 images aren't centered and the little ones along the bottom aren't either.
Lori Anderson
What a great-looking couple and fantastic-looking photos! That album is sure to impress potential clients.
eternalhope
Awesome effort you guys! You make a good team! Jonathan, your images are crisp, natural and have caught the emotion of the day. I do love the B&W images in the church, they are warm and have a "subtle grand-ness" about them. Done well mate!
tuandang79
Johnathan, what software did you use to do the album design?
jdear
photojunction...
Matt Radlinski
Great images! I like the design a lot, too, very clean and simple.

Just a minor point or two...for consistency and a unified design, I probably wouldn't have the flower background in the second spread. That's the only place where you've used an image as a background (or at least one that wasn't very, very low opacity), so it doesn't really fit in with the theme of the rest of the book. Also, be wary of using white strokes on wedding images...that pure white line is always going to be brighter than the bride's dress, and make the dress look dingy by comparison.

Excellent, excellent job!
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