Hello, there
Please can you check this album layout and tell me what do you think?
Thanks.
Analy y Javier
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Hi there!
Wow, I loved so much about this album - lots of emotion, beautiful spreads. I loved some of the reception layouts, especially the double page of thier bridal waltz - one of my favorites. Two of the layouts I didn't like: The one with them walking down the aisle. I didn't like the yellow background at all, because your album layouts are fairly dark and romantic, and the yellow just stood out too much for me. I loved the next layout with the car - very nice. The next one I didn't like was the spread after the wedding cake with the reception and all the dancing. I didn't like the photo of the bride on the left. The double spread after the tequila pictures, of bride, with all the grain is gorgeous. It one of those wow spreads that make you look at it again.
I hope my critique was OK and not too hard. All in all a great book that your client will be thrilled with
Regards from Oz,
Krystal
Wow, I loved so much about this album - lots of emotion, beautiful spreads. I loved some of the reception layouts, especially the double page of thier bridal waltz - one of my favorites. Two of the layouts I didn't like: The one with them walking down the aisle. I didn't like the yellow background at all, because your album layouts are fairly dark and romantic, and the yellow just stood out too much for me. I loved the next layout with the car - very nice. The next one I didn't like was the spread after the wedding cake with the reception and all the dancing. I didn't like the photo of the bride on the left. The double spread after the tequila pictures, of bride, with all the grain is gorgeous. It one of those wow spreads that make you look at it again.
I hope my critique was OK and not too hard. All in all a great book that your client will be thrilled with
Regards from Oz,
Krystal
QUOTE(KrystalM @ May 7 2008, 12:18 AM) 
Hi there!
Wow, I loved so much about this album - lots of emotion, beautiful spreads. I loved some of the reception layouts, especially the double page of thier bridal waltz - one of my favorites. Two of the layouts I didn't like: The one with them walking down the aisle. I didn't like the yellow background at all, because your album layouts are fairly dark and romantic, and the yellow just stood out too much for me. I loved the next layout with the car - very nice. The next one I didn't like was the spread after the wedding cake with the reception and all the dancing. I didn't like the photo of the bride on the left. The double spread after the tequila pictures, of bride, with all the grain is gorgeous. It one of those wow spreads that make you look at it again.
I hope my critique was OK and not too hard. All in all a great book that your client will be thrilled with
Regards from Oz,
Krystal
Wow, I loved so much about this album - lots of emotion, beautiful spreads. I loved some of the reception layouts, especially the double page of thier bridal waltz - one of my favorites. Two of the layouts I didn't like: The one with them walking down the aisle. I didn't like the yellow background at all, because your album layouts are fairly dark and romantic, and the yellow just stood out too much for me. I loved the next layout with the car - very nice. The next one I didn't like was the spread after the wedding cake with the reception and all the dancing. I didn't like the photo of the bride on the left. The double spread after the tequila pictures, of bride, with all the grain is gorgeous. It one of those wow spreads that make you look at it again.
I hope my critique was OK and not too hard. All in all a great book that your client will be thrilled with
Regards from Oz,
Krystal
Krystal
Your critique is more than welcome. That is the only way to improve.
I was starting to feel lonely with this post...
The kiss sequence is fabulous! But the yellow page thrown in felt out of place in the design. The family portraits look like they need to come up 1/2 to 2/3rd a stop. And the blue lights at the reception were definitely a little hard on the eyes, you may want to try converting a few more into B&W there.
You are going to be killing this soon!
Krys
You are going to be killing this soon!
Krys
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