This is the first album I design for my own business. I did a couple of designs for the studio I worked in, but not that many, so I'm fairly new to this. I would like to see some constructive criticism about the album design in general and the pictures.

Thanks!!

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GabrielFoto.com

Nice job! You told the story well. My only CC is totally personal taste, and that is that I don't ever tilt the inset images, like you did on page 7/8 and a couple other places. But if you like and your clients do too then disregard that.

~Bill

Thanks Bill! and about the tilted images I'm starting to not like them too, I saw another album from a fellow photographer and one of the pages he had some tilted images, those were the only pages in the album I didn't like.

Anyone else who wants to chip in??

Nice work. I think the tilts are not bad, you only used a few and where you used them I thought they worked.

My one photo comment is on the larger family/group shots (sorry forgot the page already) you might want to go 2 rows instead of really wide if you can. Then you can get in a bit tighter. It is kinda hard to make out the faces. It is not always possible of course since you need some elevation difference, either taller people or some steps.

Great stuff!

Thank Bill!! Anyone else wants to comment??