These are the two choices

I love them both and the multi colored hearts is exactly what I wanted. Im so excited. Please any input.

Hi Amy! I love the multicolored hearts with the black text. But I have to admit that the font is a little hard to read.
Also- Maybe if the hearts were a bit less opaque?

I love the theme- I'm thinking of those little heart candies with messages on them.
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TOOK THE WORDS RIGHT OUT OF MY MOUTH , very cute though!!!!!!

I think the number of hearts is overkill. It looks like something you'd find at a circus or a candy wrapper and not a logo.

Why not just go with something more subtle and dot the "i"s with a heart?

Also, that font is really hard to read. The grunge treatment and the letter-spacing is out of control. With the grunge and sweet candy hearts, I don't know what the message is here.

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Listen to Shaun... He's a designer. He knows his stuff.

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I like the overall idea...i think you just need to bring it back a notch!

it's hard to read, and as a small graphic does not really separate itself. i'm sure it's great big, but try to imagine it over and over and over and over again at half the size you posted it.

the first is a little easier to read, but i think there is a bit too much going on.

Great advice!

Amy,

How about something like this... I love your concept of the colored hearts... Happy, Candy, Bright, so you.

Let me know if I'm overstepping.

Thank you all for putting in the time to give me feedback. I love the multi colored hearts and when I saw the first two, it was really close to exactly what I wanted. Chelo I think I really like yours the best. I keep going back and forth between 1 and yours. I like that yours im simpler but yet I still get my dose of hearts : )

Do you mind if I use that Chelo?

I have been working with an amazing new designer as her gunea (sp?) pig.

Of course! PM me your address and I'll send you the file.

Chelo

I think it's adorable and very, very different!

Amy,

I like Chelo's version also. The one thing I see is that the right side of the hearts looks chopped off. The red hearts show it very well. So use Chelo's idea, but have the hearts redone.

-Bill

i think just a heart above the "i" would be the best. Seems to be too much going on and alot of color in my opinion!!

I like the idea of lowering the opacity on the hearts (even in Chelo's design).

Thanks guys for all of your input!!!! I wanted a ton of bright color. I am just drawn to that and it is the vision that I had to start working toward my branding.

the simple heart above the i or to dot the i's is something that crossed my mind, but Im a bit compulsive with the heart thing, i wanted bunches : )