Leon
January 31 2008, 11:45 AM
Hey John!
Overall, I think the album is killer- the clients will love it!

Constructive feedback in no particular order:
• Try to avoid splitting any body part of the bride or groom in the center. If this album goes to LC and you do split instead of folded, it can produce misaligned gaps due to trimming. (This may depend on your album company.)
• Spread 7 seems forced. In situations like this, I usually bite the bullet and just put one image on each page. Again, consider the wedding is "union" and when this album is in your hands, they are "split." Something anti-Feng Shui about it.

• Spreads like #4 are really fun to design and are satisfying to complete. But they have a high potential for looking dated in a few years.
• Similar thought to the extra strokes/borders on spread 9. My eyes are very drawn to the borders. But this is an example of a spread that has a timeless potential.
Bottom line is, does your client love it? I think you've captured the vibe and style of this couple and their family- they are represented well!
Keep up the good work, John and thanks for sharing!
-Leon