So sorry to bump the wedding cake statue of the bride (refer to comment), but this is fun stuff for me.


This is my first "real" print ad. It is in a pretty dcently exposed magazine in town with some fairly hefty pricing.They agreed to let me work off the ad space by shooting for them.

YEA!!!

What do you think.
Would you call me?
Be honest, I can take it.

BTW its already printed and does look great on the page in the mag, but I would like to improve for next time.

I think the concept is great and I love your logo and catch phrase, however, I would remove some photos and keep it to just a few bigger photos. You've got some great stuff there, but it's so crowded my eyes don't really know where to focus. Just my two cents.

I really love this, only thing I would suggest is maybe using a different font for your slogan. It is such a great idea!

Thats just what my mother said. I kind of wonderd the same thing, but wanted to show diversity.Then I got all excited and pressed the send button.I played with fonts for awhile and opted(out of indicision) on something simple that everyone could read since there was alot to look at.So many cool fonts nowadays, its hard. Thanks for the input.

I really like it. Great slogan as well.

John

Jen, Jen, Jen................Awesome concept! Very different from most print ads, I love it! Good luck with it!

Thanks Mike, you always have such kind words. I hope your having a great new year!!!

you know as a photographer i think too many pictures, but as a client i would love it. you get to see a great variety of the kinds of photography you do. its all in one place and you dont have to go and research if you dont want to. i think its great!

I agree.. I think the ad is great, very fun... but the URL, description and phone number font need a little help.

Congrats on the ad!