It really is my first one! i would love to hear some of the critiques and criticisms (don't hold anything back) but don't be afraid to say something nice if you like 'em

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Wow, I am in LOVE with that sky in the first image And I love the composition of the second one! Very fun and different.

I looked through the slideshow and it looks like you grabbed some really great moments between the two of them. The only critique I have s that I'd like to see more of the two of the smiling together! Not cheesy, looking at the camera shots, but not all so serious, either. I know it depends 100% on the couple and their personalities, but I love laughter and smiles and think that a few of those shots would enrich this solid collection of images

Wow! That first shot is a Killer!!! Great Sky and PP!

Congrats!

These are all good, but that first image absolutely rocks!!

Cuteee!! Fresh poses, great PP--I love it!

I love how modern and funky the poses are. That's my favorite. And I really like the use of the wide angle lens. I keep meaning to use it more, but I almost always forget it.

Great job. I just took my first wedding/day after shots also. Super fun. No pressure and people in love.

Wow. as stated above that first one is great (well they are all great ). Had to LOL at that second one, thats so funny.

good stuff

nice! I really love the first and the third shots. Thanks for sharing!

I agree with Heather...your posing is very creative. I love that! Great session.

mark that 2nd shot just cracks me up. very creative session!

I really like the image of them at the laundromat!

I like #1 and #3! Nice job!

-danielle

Thank you guys so so much for the wonderful feedback! I don't know where i would be without OSP!!!