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i had a senior photoshoot with him earlier today, here are the results:









Open Eyes Photography
any comments on this one? any critisism helps me guys im always looking to improve.
wrecklessgirl
interesting processing on the last one. can't tell if it should be strictly black and white or color. i think the reddish tint should be a little less saturated, and maybe warmer. fun poses tho!
<3 kristy
Nettie
I think you did a great job! The first and the last are my favs!
dragonfly
love the first one! Actually, they're all great

Now for the c and c (just little things smile.gif

First one - if he was turned just a little bit more, his whole neck would be in shade instead of just part. And the sun's pretty bright, so its a wee bit distracing.

2. The shot is great, but his face is too much the same grey tone as the paint to the right of his head. I would like to see that one in colour.

3. The background needs to be composed a little better (to keep in mind for future shoots). The woman walking behind him is a little distracting, and I'd like to see some interplay between him and the statue.

4. I would photoshop those white buildings on the left out (make them into trees). They're a bit distracting.

5. I really like this one, but his face is a little dark.

A little fill-flash or other light source on these would be useful, I think.

Hope that helps some.
kristie kulik
These are nice---but I would have liked some without the sunglasses. I lose the connection without the eyes being visible.
MonicaL
I think they are very good. I agree with PP about the sunglasses though. I'd like to see his eyes in a few of these.

Love that last shot!! It's my favorite of all of them.

Open Eyes Photography


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