Rowena, the pp isn't bad at all. I'd just say there's a bit of a green tinge in some of them (1, 3, & 5) & she looks too washed out & pasty in 4. Also, because you've added a vignette, you've made her arms/hands go bit dark & blotchy, eg 4 & 5. I think just a bit of fine tuning on whatever you did & you'll have it just right. Nice shots too, esp. 2