Hey Nicci!
First of all, thanks so much for sharing and for wanting to learn and grow.

Congrats on completeing your first E-session - it's all up from here! Practicing a LOT is the best advice I can give.
I would encourage you to try and capture their faces. None of the 3 of these pictures shows faces, which is incredibly important. Do you have some that you captured where we can see them that you would be willing to post?
Also, I don't totally love the processing on these. Why don't you post a few that have not been edited (scary, I know) so we can see what you're starting with.
Way to be bold! It's so scary to ask for CC, but it's a great thing to do!