This wedding was quite a few firsts for me. First out of state wedding. First big wedding alone. First time I did a reception slideshow. And first album design

It's simple and clean, and I like it, but I could definitely use some criticism from the pros!

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I love it! I think it's great. The only thing I'm not sure about is that yellow keyline border... but I'm guessing you used it bc it was one of the bride's theme colors/flowers.

I agree - I think it's fantastic, but I'd soften up the brightness of the yellow a bit. The rest of the album has such a nice, soft feel to it that the sudden super-brightness kind of takes away from the photos in that spread.

I love the layout and the design! The spread with the bride and the little girl both playing with the fans is my favorite.

When you show it to the clients, definitely set the slideshow to music!

Thanks so much guys! I did use the bright yellow because it was the big color from her wedding, but I could definitely tone it down a bit. In fact, I think I'll try it now! I'm off to revamp thanks to your suggestions

I am definately not a pro, but I want to say that I like it the way it is. I think bright yellow compliments the right side of the spread, while may be taking just a tiny bit away from the photos in the frame. In my opinion I dont think it is a big deal (and once again I am not a pro). Just my .02

I think it is wonderful!

I updated the link to the new album

I definitely like the new version Thanks for the suggestions. And that you Tawny for your encouragement!