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Mariah
I'm attached to the colors and really like the design but I'm struggling with the phrase...I also like "where life is art"...any suggestions? thank you!
jthrasherphoto
QUOTE(Mariah @ May 16 2007, 11:50 AM) [snapback]136451[/snapback]
I'm attached to the colors and really like the design but I'm struggling with the phrase...I also like "where life is art"...any suggestions? thank you!



I think it's too busy because of the multiple fonts used. It usually best to stick with one or two at the very most. The bright colors only add to that.

I would make the font of your tag line the same as your name just smaller.
amy squires
QUOTE(Mariah @ May 16 2007, 08:50 AM) [snapback]136451[/snapback]
I'm attached to the colors and really like the design but I'm struggling with the phrase...I also like "where life is art"...any suggestions? thank you!


i'd say lose the life becomes art ... i really like your logo and name alone.
(: amy
Mariah
There are only two fonts used (the initials and tagline are the same and the name and photography are the same) smile.gif I'll try switching the tagline quote and see how it looks.

The tagline would only be used occasionally (I like the name all alone better too). I don't even know if I really need a tagline but I kinda like it.

Thanks for the feedback!
turtle nate
QUOTE(Mariah @ May 16 2007, 12:16 PM) [snapback]136469[/snapback]
There are only two fonts used (the initials and tagline are the same and the name and photography are the same)


I think fonts are in too much contrast to each other.
Carrie Boarman
I agree with Amy, I'd like it without the tagline!
Alyssa Lang
I really really like it without the tagline. Like, a lot. Great colors too....they'll really set you apart. smile.gif
Joell
did you try making the initials white(negative space)? I think it looks busy on that end, distracting from your name. I don't like the tag line either.
Mariah
Alright, tagline gone...I wasn't sold on it anyway. Thanks all for your input. I did try the initials in white and I like that too so I'm gonna try to decide between those.

Thanks again!
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